Clifford
Nordstrom
English
101 5:30
Dr.
Sonia Begert
11
October 2015
Narrative
Paper
Let
me tell you about something that happened when I was in 4th grade.
Back then I was always reading books from The Magic Treehouse series and any
other fantasy books that really interested me. There was a test called the AR
test or The Accelerated Reader test that students could take when they finish
reading a book. Books were cataloged into different levels based on grades. The
average student would read a book suited to his/her level in the current grade.
What made this enjoyable was that students can read books and then test their
knowledge on what they read. There were many books I read and was tested on and
by taking these tests I have risen up to about grade 6 as far as reading.
Though that wasn’t much of an improvement cause there were other people above
my grade achieving levels as far as high school. It tended to get me down at
times but, I never really let it bother me so I just keep reading and testing.
Lunch
time always came and went like clockwork. I usually enter in to the lunch room
and hear almost glass shattering echoes from children either screaming or talking
over other people talking. Smell of food wafts down the hallways like a wind
rushing through the crowds of children making their way to the attractive
smells. I usually get the first thing that comes to mind when entering the
lunchroom which usually ends up being whatever is being served that day. Though
the school lunch doesn’t make out to be the best at food due the plastic feel
of cheese that if you ball up in to tight little ball shape would bounce as if
it were a bouncy ball and the cardboard pizza that seems to smell just like
pizza but is really tough to chew and generally tastes bland and unappetizing.
Though the food is not the best, it does always help to wash it down with a
nice pint of chocolate milk. Every day at lunch I would strive to eat as fast
as possible so I could race over to the library and enjoy a good read. I had a
favorite spot in the back corner of the library. I still remember every time I
would walk into the library you would be hit from what seemed like a wave of
warmth and smell of old books and paper. Like a mother reaching out to her
child so did this warmth grasp a hold of me every day during recess time. I
would immerse myself deep into the book I was currently reading at the time and
just be swept away from reality until the loud bellowing sound of the bell will
rip me into reality beckoning me to the classroom.
My
classroom is located way back behind the actually school in one of six portable
classrooms. Seems kind of ominous at times but teachers get kids to make
decorative cement stones to put along the walkway toward portables. Often times
you can hear the wildlife of the birds chirping off in the distance and frog’s croaking
as loud as possible. While making my way toward the classroom I imagined what
could happen in class today considering it was going to be time for English
portion of the day. Upon walking into the classroom like the library you would
always get hit by a wave of warmth and smell only this time it hit me more
combined with the chill of the outside winter air and the sheer warmth of the
classroom feels like a vortex sucking you in violently and dragging you into
its depths. The smell like an overused piece of chalk and the long forgotten
cardboard that nobody seems to use any more became my welcoming mat and my
greeting was at the center of the classroom was my teacher. Like all teachers
she was very warm to welcome in her students as a mother goose would welcome
her goslings. With a tall black dress and short black hair, she had a very warm
and gentle presence with a smile that will make you melt. While making my way
toward my assigned seat it felt like every step had taken its toll and felt
like I could fall asleep any moment. While the taste of milk still lingered and
my stomach full of sustenance I feel at ease taking my seat. The teacher has
always known me to bury my face in a book and has always encouraged me to
strive higher in AR, though this time she approached me with another purpose.
She asked me how I felt about reading and writing. I explained to her that
every time I would pick up a book it would sweep me away to another world but
writing has always been less interesting to me. She then smiled and was
content, though the thought of her approach was a bit weird and so after the
class which seemed to go passed in no time at all I approached her and asked
her, “What if I did have an interest in both reading and writing?” She then
said, “Write a story, it doesn’t have to be big but it has to be yours. Write a
story that you would like to read.” After brewing over the idea of writing a
story I had several ideas in mind all hitting me like a traffic jam. Later upon
arriving at my designated bus stop I had the perfect idea. The moment the bus
stopped at my bus stop I made my way toward the door and the moment I stepped
on the coarse gravel road I raced like lightning all the way home which in
reality was only two blocks away. I quickly made my way to my room and dropped
everything to pull out my notebook from my backpack. My room was your average
sized room with one window clouded over with dust and debris, my floor usually
cluttered with clothes and super Nintendo games. My bed so messy it looked as
though it wasn’t a bed but a nest made just for me a lined with many books as
an outline for my nest. I grabbed the closest pencil that was your average
wooden number two pencil and opened my notebook to place it on to my nest and
went to work.
The
topic was about a boy who was a farmer of a village whose dad ran the local saw
mill. The boy had many chores to do every day and was not surprised to have his
old man come home only to give him more chores. He repeated the process day in
and day out. Only to rest on days his old man was either too drunk or too tired
when coming home. The boy one day finds an egg while filling a water bucket at
the nearby creek. This egg was about the size of his entire torso and contained
a mystical dragon inside. I wrote about the many things this boy had to do to
keep the dragon egg safe and when the egg finally hatch so did the boy into a
man. The dragon befriended the young man and was able to talk and speak
telepathically but only to the man because of the bond he and the dragon
shared. The young man’s father finally passed leaving only his bad presence and
smell. The boy and the dragon went on an adventure and left everything behind.
I
wrote this story and what seemed to take only moments really took 5 hours. I
even skipped dinner and snack time. It wasn’t until my father came in and said
good night to me that I realized what time it was. That following morning I
presented the story to my English teacher whom upon reading it started to tear
up. I was worried that there may have been something she did not like and I was
worried I did something wrong. Hesitant a spoke but then she interrupted me
saying, “I’m Alright” taking a moment to finish the story. She then said to me,
“I hope you keep hold of these stories and one day become a great writer.” From
the wonderful words my teacher told me I was prepared to be an inspired
individual.
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